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Work in Progress Blog Challenge: Dark Energies
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I’ve been invited by fellow writer/blogger Zenobia Southcombe (you HAVE to love that name!!) to take part in the Work In Progress Blog Challenge…
This is probably the most fun blog hop I’ve come across. The idea is that I post the first line of the first three chapters of my current work-in-progress, then nominate four other bloggers to do the same. And not a bucket of ice-cubes in sight.
I’ve bent the rules ever-so slightly to also include the first line of the prologue/introduction, so there are actually four lines here. In my defence, the first line of Chapter 1 couldn’t really get much shorter.
These lines come from my first full-length novel Dark Energies; a contemporary urban mystery spiced with a healthy dose of romance and quantum physics. The story unfolds from the POV of Dan Carter, who is desperately in search of something to fill the void in his life. When he’s contacted out-of-the-blue by a mysterious young woman via a social networking site, it looks like he may just have found it. But you should be careful what you wish for…
Introduction:
Edward Stretton somehow knew that neither he, nor anyone else, would ever see his wife again.
Chapter 1:
Why am I writing this?
Chapter 2:
The hallucinations didnât begin immediately, nor were they all that strong to begin with.
Chapter 3:
Samâs flat could only be described as cluttered.
I hope you enjoyed that micro-peek into the dark and disturbing world into which Dan finds himself inexorably drawn. If nothing else, this challenge has shown me that the first line of Chapter 3 seriously needs some work!
And now to nominate the next 4 bloggers:
Over to you comrades, enjoy!
Do I Really Need A Blog?
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Yes. You do. That was very nearly the most concise blog post in the history of blog posts. Until I decided it might be more helpful to elucidate a little⌠If you aim to self-publish then absolutely yes, you should maintain a blog or a website. To be frank, even if youâre heading down the traditional publishing route, youâd be well-advised to set one up. Major publishers no longer spend the time and money promoting poor starving authors like they used to and youâll find yourself doing much of your own audience-building. Or else standing on street corners with a sandwich board. Now, I know many of you reading this have already carpeâd the diem and set up highly successful blogs, so please bear with me (or toddle off and entertain yourselves for a bit). If youâre amongst those, however, who are still pondering âbut why do I need a blog?â I shall endeavour to explain. Continue reading
Testing, testing…
StandardHello? Is this thing on…?
It’s been a while hasn’t it? Quite a long while in fact. I have been hiding away and have neglected you all, for which I offer my most sincere apologies.
I’ve been busy. Yes, OK, I know how often I use that phrase and I know you’re all frantically busy too and still find time to blog. I really have no excuse. Oh hang on… yes I do…
I have been beavering away at the novel, cracking on with the final (I do so hope) round of edits and using the gruelling opportunity of Camp NaNo to really push toward the finish line. So there, that’s kind of a good excuse no? I dropped the blog about the writing to focus on the writing. Am I forgiven?
Anyway… thought I’d just pop by to assure you all that I haven’t succumbed to a surfeit of lampreys and I’m still extraordinarily fond of each and every one of you. I shall endeavour, in my best boy scout manner, to become a better blogger again.
And – big fanfare please (ta-da-da-da-da-da-DAAAAAAA!!) – in response to some absolutely delightful comments on my previous post (a snippet of the infamous first novel, Dark Energies) I might even pop up a few more excerpts to whet your collective whistles!
Now there’s a promise for a sunny Friday morning eh?
Must dash, the peacocks are nibbling at the peonies again, but watch this space my friends…
Dark Energies
StandardIt’s been a rather hectic week here at JFC, which unfortunately means I haven’t had the opportunity to conjure up a proper post, far less the two I was aiming for.
Every cloud, however, has a silver lining and this particular batch of cumulo-nimbus is no exception. It’s all very well me banging on about writing and marketing and suchlike, but the proof of the pudding is in the reading, if you’ll excuse the mangling of a metaphor. It’s time to put my money where my mouth is and offer up a snippet of my own writing.
So, without further ado, allow me to introduce the beginning of Chapter 1 from Dark Energies – my soon-to-be-self-published first novel:
Why am I writing this? An excellent question. Maybe to try and make sense of the events of the past few months by putting them in some kind of order. Maybe to diminish the fear and confusion by sharing them with someone else. Or maybe just to convince myself that there is still a real, mundane world out there somewhere, by picturing you, my friends, sitting with a cup of coffee or a glass of wine on a comforting sofa, calmly and rationally reading this account. By the way, I hope youâll allow me the indulgence of calling you friends. Because, right at the moment, I need all the friends I can get.
Another question: How did this start? Before weâre through, there will be a whole lot more. This is where I could opt for the classic opening territory of âOnce upon a time…â or âIn a land far far way…â If only both of those were true, then my situation would be a lot easier to deal with. Knowing how this all ends would also comfort me greatly. But it isnât once upon a time, itâs not far away and it certainly hasnât ended yet. So Iâll go back to where it did begin and ask you to stick with me through this.
A Place To Belong
StandardIt is time for me to confess. I can hide my guilty secret behind a curtain of self-denial no longer.
I am enamoured with Google Plus. In fact, I may go out and get drunk and have “I heart Google+” tattooed on my bicep.
Now settle down, calm yourselves, please don’t carry on so! Allow me to explain before judging me, if you would.
Don’t Believe The Rumours
For a long time I, like many others, avoided Google+, believing the rumours that its user base consisted entirely of Google employees, a handful of early adopters and several sociopathically vain bon-vivants who could no more let a new social media vehicle pass untested than permit a bandwagon to roll by un-jumped-upon.
Then I saw the light…
35 Million Ways to Brighten Your Blog
StandardThose very generous people at Getty Images have just done us bloggers a massive favour.
Now, we all know that adding images to a blog post increases engagement. What’s that? You didn’t? There’s always one. OK, let’s backtrack to step one for any latecomers – adding images to a blog post increases engagement.
As a species, we’re pre-conditioned to respond to visual stimuli which help us add context to our environment. If those visual stimuli include kittens, our responsiveness increases dramatically. There’s almost certainly some research which bears that out but, to be honest, I was too busy going “awwwww” at pictures of kittens to hunt it down.
The Writing Process Blog Hop
StandardI have to confess to a momentâs hesitation when I was asked by the wonderful Vashti Quiroz-Vega to participate in a blog hop. Why, I thought to myself, would anyone care to know my seventeen favourite carnivorous mammals or the colour of sock I prefer when writing a prologue?
It swiftly transpired, however, that this is a blog hop of an entirely different calibre. Oh yes indeed ladies and gentlemen. This is the Writing Process Blog Hop which, as its name implies, forgoes the frivolity of many others and gets to the heart of a writerâs WIP, motivations and writing habits. But still in a rip-roaring, rollicking, rambunctious manner.
Queensbury rules: I have to answer 4 questions, then tag 4 other brilliant bloggers – and trust me, the folks Iâve tagged are 4 of the very best you could ever wish for â to pick up the metaphorical baton.
Ready? Splendid. Then letâs get goingâŚ
1) What are you working on?
My main work-in-progress is my first novel, Dark Energies. Itâs currently in the 4th (and hopefully final) series of edits. To be honest, Iâd rather print it out and eat it than have to go through another editing round.
The book is a contemporary urban mystery, liberally spiced with romance and quantum physics. It tells the story of Dan Carter, a man in his mid-30s in search of something to fill the void in his life. When Dan is contacted via a social networking site, out of the blue, by a young woman heâs never heard of, it looks like he may have found it. But Dan learns that you should be very careful what you wish for… Cliffhanger alert!
Iâm also concentrating a huge amount of time on my blog at the moment. I provide advice to indie authors to help with their marketing efforts, and the blog is my main vehicle for this. Iâm lucky to have a lengthy professional background in online marketing, so being able to help out other indies and let them concentrate on their writing feels like paying something back to those from whom Iâve learned so much about the craft.
2) How does your work differ from others in the genre?
Ooh, now thatâs a cracker of a question! The voice, definitely the voice. The story is told from Danâs POV and heâs an intriguing character, as well as a somewhat unreliable narrator. So what you read is basically what goes on in Danâs head, which gives (I hope) a unique tone to the narrative.
3) Why do you write what you write?
Iâve been waiting for someone to ask that for ages! The novelâs actually based on a true story â and it happened to me. Much like Dan, I was minding my own business, feeling a little lost, when a mysterious stranger cyber-stalked me. Out of curiosity, I responded, we struck up a conversation and things kind of went on from thereâŚ
4) How does your writing process work?
Chaotically and via osmosis. I am, as stated elsewhere, a Sporadic Trouserist. I never find as much time to work on the novel as Iâd like and I am most certainly not a plotter. I kind of jumped in at the deep end and have been learning ever since, whilst fighting my way out from the middle of the story. This means there are constantly characters and scenes and chapters and changes and story arcs and plot points whirling around in my head, with me frantically trying to keep track of what goes where. Itâs bewildering, but a whole heap of fun. Iâve started work on a second (very different) novel and am plotting that from the outset, so weâll see how that works out!
And now to pass the honours to my esteemed colleagues:
Lauren Sapala
I genuinely cannot recommend Laurenâs fantastic blog highly enough. What she doesnât know about the art and craft of creative writing â and how not to give up when the chips are down – really isnât worth knowing. Add to that a writing style which manages to be both concise and engaging and I can honestly say that this is one of my top must-read blogs.
J. R. Frontera
Jeni Frontera has a way with words which makes me want to dive head-first into every single blog post she writes and wallow for at least a week. Not only that, but she writes some of the most extraordinarily gripping dystopian-future fiction that I have ever read. And I donât even usually like sci-fi! In a nutshell, just stop reading this and go there now, OK? Cool.
Andrew Toynbee
Andrew and I began blogging at around the same time and I have followed the progress of his first novel â recently re-launched â with great interest. He is one of the most supportive, most encouraging and downright entertaining bloggers Iâve encountered. His warmth and charm shine through in every post and your life will be at least 63% better for following him.
Nightwolfâs Corner
Kisa Whipkey pulls no punches â she tells it like it is with an irresistible sense of humour and I admire her greatly for that. Nightwolfâs Corner is a blog rich with sound advice, hard-won lessons and an indomitable attitude which will have you gripping your writerâs block by the throat and grappling it to the floor without a second thought. And sheâs very very funny.
So there you have it. A peek into the world behind JFC and four new favourites to brighten your day. Enjoy!
Mind The Gap!
StandardPlot holes, those devious little blighters, have a knack of popping into existence just where you least expect them.
I am not the kind of chap who outlines a novel before jumping in to the fun of writing it. Broad brush strokes, a skeleton framework of ideas and then it’s chocks away! My transatlantic friends call this being a ‘Pantser’ – flying by the seat of one’s pants as the story takes one from point to point in a free-wheeling, fast-flowing fashion. Being from the side of the pond where the cucumber sandwich still reigns supreme, the term ‘pants’ has less savoury connotations for me. No, Pantser will not do at all. Ladies and gentlemen, I am a Trouserist.
The situation is further complicated by the fact that I don’t have the luxury of writing every day. Much as I would love to, the demands of daily life and a mortgage mean that I often struggle to find the time to write. Progress on the novel is sporadic, at best.
I am a self-confessed Sporadic Trouserist.
And that is where the plot holes worm their insidious way in… (you don’t want holes in your sporadic trousers, I assure you).
Un-Friending Facebook
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Debate rages as to whether up-and-coming authors (yep, that’s us!) should set up Facebook pages as part of their marketing and promotion strategy.
Until very recently, I would have said yes, they definitely should; spread oneself as widely as possible in order to reach the largest and most diverse audience possible. Then Facebook went and changed their algorithms and I changed my mind.
Tut-tut Facebook, go to your room immediately!
The Author As A Brand (Oh Yes You Are…)
It’s now vastly more difficult for small brands – and yes, you ARE a brand – to gain visibility and thereby increase the number of their fans. This is because Facebook now prioritises content posted by the people who users interact and engage with the most.
OK, even I had to read that 3 times before I got it, and I wrote it. So let’s have a look at what this means, with the help of a very pertinent example.




